Sorry, but due to the number of requests, Melinda can't read other writers' manuscripts.
Melinda is often asked for advice on writing and publishing. She is always willing to give advice. she is just unable to read the unpublished manuscripts that are sent to her.
If you're interested in publishing, try this website. http://www.sfwa.org/other-resources/for-authors/writer-beware/
They are full of helpful advice on who to trust and how to go about the process.
Except for classroom settings, Melinda simply can't read unpublished work from other writers.
Thanks for understanding.